Hi there, my name is Zac and I am a student in Room 12 at Mangapapa School in Gisborne. I really like how you are learning to be safe around Chromebooks. It made me think of being safe around electricity stuff. Have you thought about Adding more detail in to your writing?. If you would like to see my learning, my blog Is https://zacslearningblog.blogspot.com/
Hi there, my name is Meg and I am a student in Room 12 at Mangapapa School. I really like how you have told me how to keep yourself safe around electricity. It made me think of when I electrocuted myself. Have you thought about keeping the writing and the picture separate so you can see the picture better? If you would like to see my learning, my blog is https://megaslearning.blogspot.com/
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Thank you so much jane I hope you have a wonderful holidays.
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ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Zac and I am a student in Room 12 at Mangapapa School in Gisborne. I really like how you are learning to be safe around Chromebooks. It made me think of being safe around electricity stuff. Have you thought about
ReplyDeleteAdding more detail in to your writing?. If you would like to see my learning, my blog Is
https://zacslearningblog.blogspot.com/
Hi there, my name is Meg and I am a student in Room 12 at Mangapapa School. I really like how you have told me how to keep yourself safe around electricity. It made me think of when I electrocuted myself. Have you thought about keeping the writing and the picture separate so you can see the picture better? If you would like to see my learning, my blog is https://megaslearning.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteThanks Meg this is a really thoughtful comment. I think i might change it to make people get the reflection.
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