Kia ora Fai’ana, this is Elle from the Summer Learning Journey team.
These are some really great haiku, and you’ve chosen some very cool images - great job regarding the design work. It's cool to see you've been so busy on your blog.
However, it would be awesome if you could write your own poems for the Haiku challenge, as the SLJ team wants to see original content on your blog. These poems would be great examples for figuring out how many syllables you need for each line and what elements of summer you choose to write about.
Haiku poems are great fun to write, so it would be awesome to see what you come up with on your own! I’ll check back later to see how you’re going with your original Haiku.
Hi Fai'ana, you have done a great job on your Haiku Poem.
ReplyDeleteAwww thank you so much for commenting on my blog!
DeleteMalo E Lelei
ReplyDeleteFaiana ! The work you have did is outstanding ka pai, Keep up the good work and hope you have an wonderful New Years ...
Kia Orana Catherine, thank you so much for commenting on my blog.
DeleteKia ora Fai’ana, this is Elle from the Summer Learning Journey team.
ReplyDeleteThese are some really great haiku, and you’ve chosen some very cool images - great job regarding the design work. It's cool to see you've been so busy on your blog.
However, it would be awesome if you could write your own poems for the Haiku challenge, as the SLJ team wants to see original content on your blog. These poems would be great examples for figuring out how many syllables you need for each line and what elements of summer you choose to write about.
Haiku poems are great fun to write, so it would be awesome to see what you come up with on your own! I’ll check back later to see how you’re going with your original Haiku.
Ngā mihi,
Elle (SLJ)
Hi Elle,
DeleteThank you so much for blog commenting. Yes I would love to show my very own Haiku poems to you all. Have a great day.